Implied ..

From a comment I left on Gulnaz's blog

Sometimes we assign more subtelties
To words than they can carry
And heartfelt emotions
Are drowned in the flood
Of implied implicitness

Comments

Pushkar said…
This is beautiful and succint too. Why you choose to be anonymous?
Alien said…
Pushkar: Well, maybe so that the comments I get are honest enough.. those that know the face behind the words were meant to know and those that don't well.. they are honest to me in their comments I think.. or so I choose to think!

Thanks for droppin by
Epiphany said…
hmm...as always...Thots implied by a moment of silence always take your breath away...may even bring a tear :)....welcome back buddy!
Alien said…
epiphany: Sure ... totally agree. how are u doing?? no posts from ur side for a long time...
Saee said…
wow..I guess the break was worth it..youre back and unlike me you dont make too much noise. :)
That is why I like your verse. :)
Alien said…
Saee: ??? ... noise as in noise in the verse or noise on other people's blogs??? ;-)
Saee said…
Oh noise everywhere.. =D
but I honestly think your verse has much less of you in it..every verse has her own personality irrespective of you. :)
Your verse does not have an Ego. :)
austere said…
What is implied implicitness?

I KNOW I'm daft but tell me anyway.
Alien said…
Saee: *is humbled* ..danke .. but then how do you know there's no me in it ...???

austere: Implied Implicitness.. well, we read more into simple words, the implied meanings or the implicitness that is... and all the implicitness we assume is actually implied by the words....

do I make sense?
Epiphany said…
well i got back in the game too... :)
how true.
almost all of our stupid tiffs, and, well, not so stupid tiffs begin with one of us imagining that the other meant something cruel.
Saee said…
Oh I know there is no you in it because it is so fresh and alive every time. I keep wanting to write like that but maybe because "I" keep wanting it does not happen. =|
Anyway I am as always more noise and less sense. :)
Saee said…
and please excuse my bad english..I should really stop chatting across continents. :)
Alien said…
epiphany: Good.. cheers.. way to go ... :-)

love et al: Hope that shortening of your nick is ok by you...

we imagine the cruelty and forget all the happier moments, in fact start looking back at them with suspicios goggles, looking for malafide intentions..

Saee: The english ain't bad.. atleast mine is not good enough to notice.. so dont let that bother you.. I am surprised you find freshness in every verse.. somehow to me they all seem the same ... seem to carry the same style, the same vocabulary and the same feeble attempts to rhyme that often leave a verse stretched and devoid of the profound thought that was its muse ...
Saee said…
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Alien said…
madhu: yes.. and it troubles me tooo

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