Saturday, February 10, 2007

Awake alone...

As I watch
Your breath rise and fall

I despair
At the futility, et al

Of trying
Rhyming lines to write

When all I want
Is to sleep, tonight!

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13 Comments:

At 9:30 PM, February 10, 2007, Blogger Sh'shank said...

ponderable...
but if we got what we want wont it be too boring???
brilliant work i say...
good of u to stop by...
make it a habit will u???

 
At 5:17 PM, February 14, 2007, Blogger Epiphany said...

Before: Besides me
After: Awake alone? :)

 
At 5:24 PM, February 14, 2007, Blogger manuscrypts said...

what you need is a lullaby
to pass the night by.. :)

 
At 2:44 PM, February 16, 2007, Blogger austere said...

You know, after thinking about this for 2 days I realised "Et al" does not work for me. Too corporate-legalise like.

 
At 3:50 PM, February 16, 2007, Blogger Alien said...

pRicky: Yes.. thats why life is so interesting you know... Thanks for dropping by too.. will make my visits more often too..!

Epiphany: Before: Poetic fantasy .. After: Closer to reality! :-)

manuscrypts: Sing ... I'm all ready to sleep..

austere: How about 'of it all' ... et al I must concede that 'et al' was a rhyming patch

 
At 11:02 AM, February 17, 2007, Blogger austere said...

Right on about the rhyme part. "et al" does have an encompassing sense that "of it all" doesn't quite do justice to. The jury's out.

 
At 2:04 PM, February 17, 2007, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey. How r u doing? I visit ur blogs regularly to chk for updates....Looks like u dnt get much time these days..Howz R? How r ur studies going?

 
At 3:11 PM, February 17, 2007, Blogger Alien said...

austere: Yeah... probably hung!! :-D

ashwini: Thanks... busy with books. R is doing fine too.. U in the land of the Nizam?

 
At 6:28 PM, February 19, 2007, Blogger Ree said...

Just wot i need when i am going on 5 hours of cumulative sleep for the last one week, yet again.

 
At 5:07 PM, February 28, 2007, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Land of Nizam?...Not really...In Mumbai on weekdays n Pune on weekends.

 
At 6:09 PM, February 28, 2007, Blogger Alien said...

Reema: How are things now.. hope you are catching more sleep!!!

Ashwini: Oh... wonder why I thought so.... why the shuttling around?

 
At 1:57 PM, March 01, 2007, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Shortlived memory u have!!! Had sent u my marriage invitation!!!

Im wrking in mumbai n married in pune...so the shuttling!

 
At 12:35 PM, March 25, 2007, Blogger Chaotic said...

shifted base - http://mesmerism.wordpress.com :)

 

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