Monday, October 26, 2009

October Revolution (... edited)

The Autumn wind
Redistributes the golden leaves
In his quest for 'socialism'...

7 Comments:

At 6:23 PM, October 26, 2009, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I liked the concept quite a lot... autumn leaves, the wind and the october revolution nicely put together.

 
At 11:28 PM, October 26, 2009, Blogger Zaphod Boozlebrox said...

I like the earlier version better.

The Autumn wind
Redistributes the golden leaves
In its quest for socialism.

I think this carries more punch. :)

 
At 1:47 AM, October 27, 2009, Blogger Saee said...

yes I like the first version too
Because socialism is an unexpected word and it really adds that jerk to the verse. :)
Ingenious. :)

 
At 3:08 AM, October 27, 2009, Blogger Alien said...

I think I go for the first one too....

@anonymous, charu, saee : thanks ....

 
At 3:01 PM, October 27, 2009, Blogger austere said...

I will never look at autumn leaves in quite the same way ever again.

 
At 1:49 PM, October 28, 2009, Blogger Epiphany said...

:) Glad to see you back in form!

 
At 2:15 AM, November 02, 2009, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Interesting idea... :)

 

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