Monday, October 26, 2009

October Revolution (... edited)

The Autumn wind
Redistributes the golden leaves
In his quest for 'socialism'...

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

I liked the concept quite a lot... autumn leaves, the wind and the october revolution nicely put together.

Charudatta Galande said...

I like the earlier version better.

The Autumn wind
Redistributes the golden leaves
In its quest for socialism.

I think this carries more punch. :)

Saee said...

yes I like the first version too
Because socialism is an unexpected word and it really adds that jerk to the verse. :)
Ingenious. :)

Alien said...

I think I go for the first one too....

@anonymous, charu, saee : thanks ....

austere said...

I will never look at autumn leaves in quite the same way ever again.

Epiphany said...

:) Glad to see you back in form!

Ramnath R Iyer said...

Interesting idea... :)