October Revolution (... edited)

The Autumn wind
Redistributes the golden leaves
In his quest for 'socialism'...

Comments

Anonymous said…
I liked the concept quite a lot... autumn leaves, the wind and the october revolution nicely put together.
I like the earlier version better.

The Autumn wind
Redistributes the golden leaves
In its quest for socialism.

I think this carries more punch. :)
Saee said…
yes I like the first version too
Because socialism is an unexpected word and it really adds that jerk to the verse. :)
Ingenious. :)
Alien said…
I think I go for the first one too....

@anonymous, charu, saee : thanks ....
austere said…
I will never look at autumn leaves in quite the same way ever again.
Epiphany said…
:) Glad to see you back in form!
Ramnath R Iyer said…
Interesting idea... :)

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