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I liked the concept quite a lot... autumn leaves, the wind and the october revolution nicely put together.
I like the earlier version better. The Autumn windRedistributes the golden leaves In its quest for socialism.I think this carries more punch. :)
yes I like the first version tooBecause socialism is an unexpected word and it really adds that jerk to the verse. :)Ingenious. :)
I think I go for the first one too....@anonymous, charu, saee : thanks ....
I will never look at autumn leaves in quite the same way ever again.
:) Glad to see you back in form!
Interesting idea... :)
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