Alone with Life: October Revolution (... edited)

Monday, October 26, 2009

The Autumn wind
Redistributes the golden leaves
In his quest for 'socialism'...

At 6:23 PM, October 26, 2009, Anonymous said...: I liked the concept quite a lot... autumn leaves, the wind and the october revolution nicely put together.
At 11:28 PM, October 26, 2009, Zaphod Boozlebrox said...: I like the earlier version better.

The Autumn wind
Redistributes the golden leaves
In its quest for socialism.

I think this carries more punch. :)
At 1:47 AM, October 27, 2009, Saee said...: yes I like the first version too
Because socialism is an unexpected word and it really adds that jerk to the verse. :)
Ingenious. :)
At 3:08 AM, October 27, 2009, Alien said...: I think I go for the first one too....

@anonymous, charu, saee : thanks ....
At 3:01 PM, October 27, 2009, austere said...: I will never look at autumn leaves in quite the same way ever again.
At 1:49 PM, October 28, 2009, Epiphany said...: :) Glad to see you back in form!
At 2:15 AM, November 02, 2009, Anonymous said...: Interesting idea... :)